CARVED (first shoot):
Feedback:
- Floating blue light, smudge, crop out/be careful of
- Two titles one font, next two different font (for testing) can be screenshots
- Animation of fonts, horror, key frames
- Titles -> director first
- Upper case + lower case
- Add an ident + voice over and images for context
- Ambient sound, cars, no dead air
- Signify falseness in EMMA, puts on glasses for phone call
- Delay showing EMMA, more use of mis-en-scene
- Even more mis-en-scene
- Change country “Italy” is blurred
- Pan up to Emma after knife
- Long takes, need reaction shots (knock)
- No paint in coming back to same shot
- Candles = shadows
- Panic needs to continue, continuous banging/cross-cutting
- Longer take = less convincing
- Lots of shots for panic sequence
- Lamp for entrance
- Hinting someone is outside
- EMMA looks around frantically/curtains down
- Panting after looking around (OLIVIA)
- Don’t have a dictionary
- Avoid foreign book
- Too minimal dirt on her face
- Makeup on camera, testing (w/o cast)
- Start kettle way earlier
- Lighter dress for more dirt
- Show OLIVIA after murder
- Cut from shoe to back to shoe
- No diegetic titles, animated maybe
- Maybe reveal motive in escape sequence
- Get footage for lighting and makeup
- Radio instead of phone call
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